Title of the short film : Bayam
Director's name : Sivaraman
Analysis :
Direction : More better
Editing : Good
Cinematography : Better
Screenplay : Good
Locations : Good
Playback music : Very good
Acting : More better
Appreciation :
Screenplay and playback music are the highlights of this short film. Editing worked well to hide glitches. This short film seems to be different and something new.
Verdict :
1.Though the theme of the story is clear, the story remains to be a suspense to audience which means that it can be filmed more clearly.
2. Camera works need to be improved.
3. After kidnapping, one of the two guys who have kidnapped asked the one who has been kidnapped that what was his father, then after a while the same guy confess that the father runs a college. May be the one who is kidnapped have said but still there remains a glitch since cloth was wrapped around his mouth. It will be good if they can show the scenes clearly.
4. Voice recorded is feeble in most of the scenes.
5. 'The fixing of "kidnapping" as the means for earning' scene seems to be without logic and can have shot with seriousness.
Status : More better
Rating : 13/4 outof 5 stars
Bottom line : ok but work hard
Director's name : Sivaraman
Analysis :
Direction : More better
Editing : Good
Cinematography : Better
Screenplay : Good
Locations : Good
Playback music : Very good
Acting : More better
Appreciation :
Screenplay and playback music are the highlights of this short film. Editing worked well to hide glitches. This short film seems to be different and something new.
Verdict :
1.Though the theme of the story is clear, the story remains to be a suspense to audience which means that it can be filmed more clearly.
2. Camera works need to be improved.
3. After kidnapping, one of the two guys who have kidnapped asked the one who has been kidnapped that what was his father, then after a while the same guy confess that the father runs a college. May be the one who is kidnapped have said but still there remains a glitch since cloth was wrapped around his mouth. It will be good if they can show the scenes clearly.
4. Voice recorded is feeble in most of the scenes.
5. 'The fixing of "kidnapping" as the means for earning' scene seems to be without logic and can have shot with seriousness.
Status : More better
Rating : 13/4 outof 5 stars
Bottom line : ok but work hard