Title of the short film : My Diary
Director's name : Narayanan
Analysis :
Direction : Good
Editing : Better
Cinematography : Better
Screenplay : More better..
Locations : Very good
Playback music : Better
Acting : More Better. .
Appreciation :
The theme for instance , it is good and this short film is a good initiative from the director. The story which bolds the film , worked well to give audience a lateral thought. A 'clean' project , to say simply. Camera angles , Simple but yet perfect editing , somewhat touching thought and a good background (music and locations) makes the audience to hesitate to speak on verdicts of this short film.
Verdict :
1.The photos of the film crew must not be shown at the starting of the film since it dilutes the feel of the short film.
2. The idea / thought can be expressed in a strong manner with even more touching scenes.
3. The film's video texture / colour theme can be appealing with dark shade and breezy* way so that it builds the feel of this short film to many folds.
4. The inner voice for the dumb person does not sounds good since it seems mature than the one shown in the film.
5. The photo of the editor is shown in the opening credits who is none other than the dumb person. This is noticeable and dilutes the film.
6. Though this film is shot fastly , audience will not accept this point.
Status : More better..
Rating : 1 3/4 out of 5 stars
Bottom line : A good initiative.
Director's name : Narayanan
Analysis :
Direction : Good
Editing : Better
Cinematography : Better
Screenplay : More better..
Locations : Very good
Playback music : Better
Acting : More Better. .
Appreciation :
The theme for instance , it is good and this short film is a good initiative from the director. The story which bolds the film , worked well to give audience a lateral thought. A 'clean' project , to say simply. Camera angles , Simple but yet perfect editing , somewhat touching thought and a good background (music and locations) makes the audience to hesitate to speak on verdicts of this short film.
Verdict :
1.The photos of the film crew must not be shown at the starting of the film since it dilutes the feel of the short film.
2. The idea / thought can be expressed in a strong manner with even more touching scenes.
3. The film's video texture / colour theme can be appealing with dark shade and breezy* way so that it builds the feel of this short film to many folds.
4. The inner voice for the dumb person does not sounds good since it seems mature than the one shown in the film.
5. The photo of the editor is shown in the opening credits who is none other than the dumb person. This is noticeable and dilutes the film.
6. Though this film is shot fastly , audience will not accept this point.
Status : More better..
Rating : 1 3/4 out of 5 stars
Bottom line : A good initiative.